oh, oh , want more than less

by Michael Crawford
(Arlington, Wa USA)

so much to say, can't agree
so much to want, let's let that be
needed more time to talk, under that old tree
not another discussion with others, just with me

I noticed the door is finally closed by her
I can think of a fix, a cure
so close to find a cure sure
don't know why she give me a brochure

Chorus
oh, oh, yes
oh, oh , want more than less
oh, oh, I will no longer guess
oh, oh, we can't digress

lovers stay together or walk away
why can't they just find a way
I asked her not to go but just stay
I heard the line, if you say the right words, I may

I see so many empty bottles of beer
not enough table space I fear
I looked in her eyes yesterday, I noticed a tear
I look in the back of my truck, plenty of gear

so hard to suppress how I really feel
not sure I can get in my truck and grab the wheel
our hearts just aren't made of steel
shout out my feelings, feelings I can't conceal

Chorus
oh, oh, yes
oh, oh , want more than less
oh, oh, I will no longer guess
oh, oh, we can't digress

I see so many people boarding a train
so much to talk about, no time to explain
can they be feeling their own pain
I don't want our relationship to go down the drain

my truck is going south, to see her again
my feelings so strong, hurts my brain
together again, so much to gain
I can't wait to see you again, my lovely Jane

Chorus
oh, oh, yes
oh, oh , want more than less
oh, oh, I will no longer guess
oh, oh, we can't digress

Chorus
oh, oh, yes
oh, oh , want more than less
oh, oh I will no longer guess
oh, oh, we can't digress


Chorus
oh, oh, yes
oh, oh , want more than less
oh, oh I will no longer guess
oh, oh, we can't digress













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Aug 05, 2013
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Enjoyed--Is the title the best title for the lyrics? NEW
by: Don VanHallstra

I enjoyed this a lot!
I felt it was asking if the struggles of the relationship were worth it? Did I get it right?

I did wonder if the title really represented what you wanted to say (or what the lyrics had to say) or if the lyrics would seep into a person's mind and stick with them as they begin to listen.

I thought of the word ambivalence as I read through it. Also, I wondered if you sacrificed rhyming for content?

Does it need a bridge that shocks and stops the listener in its tracks?
Thanks for sharing!
Don

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