Can I by James Cook

by James Cook
(Viet nam)

Can I (X3)

CanI catch your falling star Can I be there when you call, Can I (X3)

Can I catch you before fall can I hold you in my arms

Can I (X3)

Can I be your shelter through the rain can I take way your pain Girl....

Can I (X3) OOOO Can I (X3)

Can I Love you through the night Can I make you feel alright Can I (X3)

Can I take wipe your away tears I can Take away your fears Can I (X3)

Can I be the one thats loving you Can I be the one you come running too Babe girl Can I (X3)

OOOO Cani look you in your eyes can we get in paradise

Can I (X3) CanI wake up next to you Can i be the only one Loving you Can I (X3)

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Oct 21, 2014
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HOOD Angel NEW
by: james cook

Hood Angel
Hood Angel


Don't Let The
Game change You
the streetz who raise
you
Don't forget who Blazes
with you
Don't forget who made you
Only God can Judge
You
Only Thugs can hold you
Hood Angel
Hood Angel
I"LL always be down for You
Sale a couple pounds
for you


Hood Angel
Hood Angel


I'm down to ride for you
Do hard time for you
Earn my Strides for you
I'm a Soldier
for you
Go to war over you
Smoke my
last Dime with you

Hood Angel
Hood Angel
Don't Let the
Game change you
The streetz who
raise you
Don't forget who
Blaze with you


Hood Angel
Hood Angel


Don't forget who
Made You
Only God Can Judge
You
Only Thugs can hold you

Hood Angel
Hood Angel

I'LL always be down for you
Sale a couple
pounds for you


Hood Angel
Hood Angel


Shut Down
Blocks for You
Set up shops for
you
rolling in Drop
with you
Hood Angel
Hood Angel
island hop
in yacht for
two
Nothing
Money can't
Buy for you
the Ice on
your neck is Blue

Hood Angel
Hood Angel


Don't let the Game
Change You
the streetz who
raise you
Don't forget
who blazes
with you
Hood Angel
Hood Angel
Don't forget
who made you
Only God can
Judge
You

Only Thugs
can Hold
you
Hood Angel
Hood Angel
I"ll always be down
for you
Sale a couple pounds for
you
Hood Angel
Hood Angel
The let
The Game
Change You
The Streetz who
Raise You
Don't forget
who Blazes
with you





Apr 04, 2013
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contest Nash.Tenn NEW
by: Rachel

James,

Although your lyric "Can I?" was not chosen in the lyric writing contest for a free production, there are several judges and staff who feel that it deserves a demo and promotion. Therefore, we are happy to offer you a chance to have your demo produced professionally and promoted to the music industry. There is a one time fee for this service which is very reasonable. I have pasted a link below for your review. There you will find all necessary information as to what type of production packages we offer and pricing. This is a once in a lifetime opportunity. Don't miss out! Please let me know if you have any questions. We look forward to working with you and always feel free to enter our monthly contest. -Rachel

Review of "Can I?": The title is strong b/c by posing a questions the listener wants to hear the song for the answer. Repeating "Can I" through out the lyric creates cohesion and drives the song forward. You have good rhyme through out the lyric which creates good rhythm which makes the song flow well. Also, posing questions engages your listener and makes them think about what you're saying. The length is good as well as your song structure and verse/chorus format.

I hope we get to work on "Can I?" soon!

Apr 04, 2013
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contest Nash.Tenn NEW
by: Rachel

James,

Although your lyric "Can I?" was not chosen in the lyric writing contest for a free production, there are several judges and staff who feel that it deserves a demo and promotion. Therefore, we are happy to offer you a chance to have your demo produced professionally and promoted to the music industry. There is a one time fee for this service which is very reasonable. I have pasted a link below for your review. There you will find all necessary information as to what type of production packages we offer and pricing. This is a once in a lifetime opportunity. Don't miss out! Please let me know if you have any questions. We look forward to working with you and always feel free to enter our monthly contest. -Rachel

Review of "Can I?": The title is strong b/c by posing a questions the listener wants to hear the song for the answer. Repeating "Can I" through out the lyric creates cohesion and drives the song forward. You have good rhyme through out the lyric which creates good rhythm which makes the song flow well. Also, posing questions engages your listener and makes them think about what you're saying. The length is good as well as your song structure and verse/chorus format.

I hope we get to work on "Can I?" soon!

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